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Showing posts with label Writing. 2018. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. 2018. Show all posts

Tuesday, 20 November 2018

Writing. 2018,



Long ago, there was an ancient tribe from the country now known as Australia. The tribe lived off the land and had to hunt and gather for their food.  In this land, the impressive dragon tail was the ultimate prize because it provided food for the whole tribe. Only the most mighty and cunning warriors could hunt such an animal.

This is the story of one such tribe, on an epic hunt to catch one of these mighty animals.

One day the mighty warrior decided it was time to hunt the dragons. He was angry that the dragons were burning some of the villiage. He went on the hunt dancing like he was from Fortnight and he got the dragon with his spear and the village was really happy and hungry.

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Thursday, 15 November 2018

Writing. 2018,

One morning when I woke up, I saw a floating island.  When I walked to the floating island, I saw a tunnel and I went thru it, it was dark.  I couldn’t even see anything but I can hear noises from the floating island like Fortnite.  When I went to the floating island I didn’t know it was my grandpa’s house. Then my papa had yummy food.  It was McDonalds, KFC, Burger King and takeaway. I ate all of them, and I saved some of the food for my grandpa, my parents, my cousins and my family because it was Mother’s Day.  At my parent’s house my Dad was cooking pig and when we went to our grandpa’s house we played Fortnite all day long. We ate pig and all that food that we made especially Lu Sipi.

Thursday, 30 August 2018

moui sheep


I am going to go and get my baby back before she takes it, cooks it and eats it. That was a good save! My baby is happy because he was hungry

Tuesday, 28 August 2018

moui shep Dictation




The mother sheep followed me along the path, picking up her pace as she realised I was within touching distance of her lamb. She let out a loud low bleat which echoed across the paddock. The sleeping lamb lifted it’s head and turned toward us, before slowly returning to it’s sleep. As the sheep got closer and closer, I thought about whether I should turn and run. I began to panic, “Was she going to attack me?” Holding my breath, I froze. I sighed as the sheep dodged me and ran protectively towards it’s lamb. “Phew, that was a close call.”

Monday, 13 August 2018

Movie Narrative



Movie Narrative

On Monday 13th of August, my friend Jerry went to Nukualofa in Tonga because his uncle was getting married. Jerry’s uncle, Tevita was going to marry Ilisapesi. Lots of people were coming to celebrate the wedding.

I had to stay at school with Mrs Moala and Miss West to do some school work like I am doing now. I wanted to say Hi to Jerry when he was in Tonga. So I tried to email him using gmail.


Hi Jerry. It’s me, Moui. I am trying to message you to remind you not to put your hotel address on Facebook. Just in case people will know where you are and might steal all your stuff and you are gonna be in danger and homeless if they steal your money.

Have a good time in Tonga. Bring me some presents from Tonga ok. From Moui.

Jerry emailed me back and said

To Moui

Thank you for reminding me to be cybersmart. I will remember to bring your presents when I come home next week. Bye, see you next week. From Jerry.

I told Mrs Moala and Miss West that I helped Jerry to be cybersmart when he was in Tonga. They were very proud of me.




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