Immersion Assembly Recount

Miss Szymanik helped us write this recount about Immersion Assembly.

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Narrative writing plan

Recount writing 2018

Your Task: Recount a time when you have felt scared or surprised.

Planning: Who? Mum, Dad, family What happened? It was my birthday with a cake and the happy birthday song at Skycity. When? May 12th (my birthday) Where? At Skycity for dinner for my birthday How ? I had dinner at Skycity and I had a birthday cake was a Fortnite cake. My cake was yum

Writing: 
On May the 12th it was my birthday. Mum, Dad, my family and I went to the Skycity for dinner for my birthday. I didn’t know they were going to surprise me. First they sang Happy Birthday to me at Skycity. They sang Happy Birthday to me in English first and then Tongan. Then we had dinner at Fortuna. I ate prawns, mussels and oysters. Oysters are yummy. After eating my seafood, we had to wait. We had to wait for my sister Victoria to come with my cake. I was surprised. It was a chocolate flavoured Fortnite cake. The whole thing was covered in green and there was Fornite written on it. It had #1 Victory Royale and it had pictures on it and some bandages and a treasure chest. I had a fun birthday

Design My Own Sport

For writing this week, I had to create my own sport. This is what I came up with (as dictated to the teacher).

We will need a bat, and we will need a helmet and a one wheeled bike, to fight with people.and a safety knee pads, and safety elbow pads, and a painted face like a clown and we act like a clown and we fight our own teammate.

We can play Outside or  inside that is a nour so that is another way to play

I will need 15 players i will need two teams to continue the game.

We will need a bat, and we will need a helmet and a one wheeled bike, to fight with people.and a safety knee pads, and safety elbow pads, and a painted face like a clown and we act like a clown and we fight our own teammate.

We can’t run away with the ball you have to share it and we can’t hog the ball.  You need to share as a team with the girls because the girls are supposed to have a turn.

You will know if you have won by counting the points.  who ever has the most points is the winner.

Animation Script

We are learning about Move ya body. We need to eat healthy food like vegetables and fruit. We need to drink water. We need to have lots of sleep too. The game I am playing in my animation is Rugby League Thank you for watching. Please feel free to leave me a post comment on my blog.

Sky Diving Recount

I Went to sione and siaku and Austin and we went to the Airport and we went All the way up high and we Jumped Out of The Aeroplane and we were happy that we were in the Ground and we went to Sleep.and We woke up the next morning and we had breakfast

And we went to school and told the teacher about the dream and we went to morning tea and lunch and we went to class.and we went home and we tell mum and dad and we went to Church and we went Back home and we Had KFC for dinner and i went to sleep and i Wake up up the next morning and we went to the Park.and we went to Sylvia Park and we look for Some clothes. And we We looked at my Blog and we Saw my work and we were happy About the story and we went to KFC.THE END.

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writing, 2018, miss moala and miss west

On the afternoon when school finished Mrs West and Mrs Moala had to make a about movie  two balls  and they drop the two balls. And then they put the two balls all  together. and then they got the basketball and the small golden ball. Crack and then they had to clean up the cracking golden ball. Miss moala had to go and get the broom to tidy up the mess. And miss west went to the ground and help miss moala.  The ball fall down  and the ball

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writing, 2018, miss moala and miss west

  

animation plan

Recount writing: Untie the human knot!

 we create a circle and we  put our hands in the  and d air. and then we put our hands to together.we lined and we Walk to class

Lego Picture Prompt Story

The piates came in boat to destroy ther villeage because they wanted to live in the village.